Woh jaa rha hai, yeh khyaal aate hi ek aansu uske gaal pe tapak gya. Ab woh use kabhi nhi dekh paayegi... woh uska muskuraana, gaate rehnaa, pyaar se dekhnaa, ankahi baat samajh jaanaa.... uska ehsaas sab dhundlaa ho jaayegaa.......
kyun rok nhi sakti woh use.. aakhir kyun woh itni bebas hai aaj...
Baut dur jaa rha hai woh... uske saaye se bhi dur ho jaayegi woh...
Kya woh use kabhi mil paayegii... kya woh use kabhi dekh paayegii... kya woh use kabhi sun paayegii....
Kuch kehnaa chahti hai woh uske jaane se pehle:
" My Love..... (shayad phir kabhi naa bol paun)
Tum the to life mein ek khush thi jiska ehsaas mujhe tumhare jaane ke baad ho rha hai.
Tum the to jinaa aasan tha.. ab to har pal baut lambaa hai.
Tum the to aankhoon mein sapne the ... ab aansun ke alaava inmein kuch nhi...
Tum the to yeh duniya meri thi..ab paraayi si ho gai hai..
Tum the to raaste pe chalnaa ayaa .. ab ek kadam bhi bhaari lagta hai..
Tum the to ek nayaa ehsaas tha mere andar .. ab sab khaali sa lagta hai..
Ek andhere mein kho si gyi hun.. kaash tum aate aur mujhe apni baahon mein sambhaal lete...
Thankyou.. mujhe woh sab pal dene ke liye ....... jo main apne kareeb rakh saku......
Thankyou.. mujhe chodhne ke liye bhi.. kyunki.. ab maine jaanaa ki tum mere baut pass ho...hamesha ke liye..
Main hamesha tumhe yaad karungi us hasi ke beech jo tum de gye,
un aansuon ke beech jo tum de gye, un saason ke beech jo tum de gye.
Ab koi shikwaa nhi mujhe kyunki tum muhje khaali nhi chodh gye....
Only Yours Love "
Then she got a call from a person who gave her an envelope... addressing her:
Briana adams
# 234,7th street, Melbourne
Contents: Death certificate of Martin adams.
Seriously tulls... bahut achhi hai... ek pal ke liye aisa laga maano apni zindagi ki kahani padh rahi hu teri likhi poem ki form mein... It really touched the deepest chords of my heart... Awesome dear...
ReplyDeleteWow........ this is only of its kind poem/narration I have ever read!!
ReplyDeletegud one...i nvr knew ki my rommie is such a gud writer
ReplyDeleteLaddu singh---The writer.....
ReplyDeletemujhe to pehle se hi apka hunar pta hai bes aise hi likhte raho acchi acchi poems.....
God bless you.....
yar.... really gud.....
ReplyDeletesach me tune likha hai kya....
i cant believe if u dont hav a copyrite....
but anyways.... its too gud (and sad)
happy ending honi chahiye thi na.......
keep smiling always.......
nice.. ;-) iska naam hona chahiye tha "tapak gaye mr Adams.."
ReplyDeleteThanks to all for such a gud support..
ReplyDeleteand nice suggestion.. :D
the beginning part was something i could have imagined... as it was just happening with me... while me being on the other side... when i wsas leaving the college... but anyways.. very well written... and a nice twist also... :)
ReplyDeletegood.my little one.
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